I agree, that's a good change. Our society needs to make every effort to stop any form of misogyny. I'd prefer to see efforts in pursuit of this objective directed at institutions that use religious exemptions in order to violate anti discrimination laws. For example, many churches prevent women from taking on leadership roles. This specific change you highlight in Dahl's text is a very good one, but I find it extremely disturbing that it feels like this example is the ceiling of the activism we're allowed. Thanks for the very thoughtful comment.