That's a fair review. I was thinking about something similar recently. I've been writing a book for my kids and I've been indulging myself and allowing it to stretch out more. They're not bored, so I guess it's okay to do that. However, that does make it a bit tougher to sell a manuscript. I do have a rough draft of a sequel to this book I keep contemplating dusting off... but I'm busy. Thanks for writing.